Wednesday, March 21, 2007

I Think It's Me Comments

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Is it a dream or reality, do we fade or stay in focus?
We think we are real but who really knows the inside of us.
You have substance; I can feel and hear you speak.
I turn my back. Are you still there? Do you really exist?
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Steven Robinson
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Sourav Rc 29 March 2007

Thoughtful poem indeed... You've written it very well...

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Brian Dorn 21 March 2007

I think it's a well thought out poem, Steven... you certainly had ME thinking. Good write! ! Brian

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Terrance Woolridge 21 March 2007

I like this one Steve It's a hot write

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David Taylor 21 March 2007

You cant be what you can see, turn the light up!

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