I Touched Your Scent Poem by Donna Hicks

I Touched Your Scent

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I touched your scent
in my dreams last night.
I fell into your eyes.
What beauty beheld me
from the other side.
What marvels there to feast upon.
Silence fell in the depths of a man.
Earthly tones I don’t understand.

Looking out instead of in,
I saw what’s been seen from both ends.
Where laughter lies in the
blueness of his eyes,
so joy lives in shades of brown.

I awoke from my dream
peering into my soul
when blue eyes looked back at me.
A heart opened wide,
for inside another must reside.
Blue eyes would suit
me fine in reality’s share.

I touched your scent
in my dreams last night.
I fell into your eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonny Rainshine 31 May 2006

Shimmering images and perfect line breaks. Excellent work.

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Nancy Haney 31 May 2006

This is a poem similar to one of mine that i've wrote.....Great Job Donna, keep writting em.

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Donna Hicks

Donna Hicks

Hutchinson, Kansas
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