Joseph Cuevas

Rookie (08-22-1994 / Philadelphia, PA)

I Tried.. - Poem by Joseph Cuevas

I tried to tell her with her music turned up so loud,
That I saw an image of her face in every passing cloud.
I tried to tell her as the truck drove by,
That I couldn't help but always get lost in her eyes.
I tried to tell her as the passing train roared,
That she was a more important thing to me than a knight needs his sword.
I tried to tell her as she covered her ears,
That i have been in love with her for oh so many years.
I tried to tell her but would she ever hear,
For the thought of her actually hearing was my one and only utterless fear...

Comments about I Tried.. by Joseph Cuevas

  • (2/22/2010 11:30:00 AM)

    How beautiful! ! =)
    I love your examples!
    I know exactly what you mean, working up enough courage is so hard.
    You are very good at writing about human emotion, please don't stop!
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  • (2/2/2010 3:57:00 AM)

    Again, amazing :) You're really goood at this! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 7, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, December 7, 2009

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