Wednesday, March 5, 2014

I Used To Start By Saying 'sorry' Comments

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I used to start by saying sorry
For my choice of verse
For the words I was about to speak
It was really quite a curse
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David J Lindsay
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Susan Lacovara 06 March 2014

I think the only apology needed is for words left unspoken, unwritten, left gasping to be heard, from the depth of one's heart. This is a wonderful reminder of how words shared can magnetically connect to souls, be them even of strangers, who stand close enough to hear them. I loved this write....and you are right on! PEACE

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Valerie Dohren 05 March 2014

Very good David - no need to say sorry for this one. Well done.

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Elannia L. 05 March 2014

Very nice poem. I like the progression and the fixed form. Not many people can pull that off.

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Elannia L. 05 March 2014

Very nice poem, I really like the progression, and the fixed form. Not many people can pull that off.

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David J Lindsay

David J Lindsay

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