I'Ve Been There Before Poem by mandara pookal

I'Ve Been There Before

Rating: 3.2


I've been there before
The space in your heart
It's crunchy inside
You're filled with such art
I've tried to make space
So trapped there inside
But all I have gained
Is silence that's price

I've been there before
The creek in your mind
It's raging inside
You're one of my kind
I've added to thoughts
In soulful sprung lines
But all I have gained
Is wrongful opines

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 17 December 2009

Much expressive much poetic Mandara...who knows what's the truth inside? ...but to me it seems you wre there! And you are there! With your nice poem...thanks...10

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 December 2009

Another beautiful poem from you. Art of love is shown beautifully Well penned Enjoyed reading it 10+

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