Wednesday, January 30, 2008

I'Ve Lost My Mind Comments

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Where should I look, I’ve lost my mind
Where is that glow in my eyes
They must be hiding with father time
Where is the one I need to find
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Kevin Sullivan
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Great insight to what has been seen and where did it go? I have felt this way before. Cant wait to read more.

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This poem reads like someone in a fog, not quite able to see forward. Maybe someone in a relationship in the midst of turmoil. I see it as open to multiple interpretations. And it gets you thinking as you read it. Good poem, L&T

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