“i Want To Breathe You” Poem by persian khushi

“i Want To Breathe You”

Rating: 5.0


I want to get lost in your eyes
The windows to your soul
Of a depth untold
The deeper I fall inside your soul
Drowning in blissfulness
Beyond our control
A perfect union of our inners
A perfect inner muse
We are made of the same matter
As we each journey our spiritual paths
Together supporting and discussing
Though our realms may differ
Our experiences on the same level
The depth of us each other feels
Our souls talk to each other while asleep
Holding your hand your head in my lap
As we sit together
I feel your eyes on me, a smile on your lips
And telepathically I beckon you to do the same
Our souls in the dance of heaven
Reluctantly you change your position
Not seeing that I am smiling too

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
10/6/13
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The title saving the rest of the poem is fantastic.. The title will be 'I Want to Breathe'....kindly do the correction.. nice poem in theme Your passionate feelings revealed.. Dr.Ratan Bhattacharjee

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Ramesh Rai 27 June 2013

beautiful write. xlent.10 ++++

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