I Want U Poem by sim sharma

I Want U

Rating: 4.5


Ur my love, my soul my song
you are the only angel whom i want to belong,
i want umbrella of your hands, when sorrows shower me the rain,
i want to stay with you, in happiness or in pain.
I want you to walk in front of me,
so that i can walk in your fut imprints,
i wan to become your shadow, so that i can be with you always
i wan to become not sun not moon, but a star of your life,
so that i can be with u either in day or night,
i want to become your voice so that whenever u say, i will come with you,
i want to become your sight, where ever you see, i can see with you.
i want to become your thoughts, i want to become your heart,
so that where ever you go, u take me with you,
i want to b in you, can leave you never,
that day you will b mine forever n ever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shelly Shelly 10 November 2009

well well.. a very idealistic view presented here..esp in the lines 'i want to become your voice so that whenever u say, i will come with you, i want to become your sight, where ever you see, i can see with you' . such a devotion is very rare in practical life..but a brilliant poetry..

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Really good... A very silent poem...

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