Came Closer To Leave Forever Poem by sim sharma
Came Closer To Leave Forever
he came close to me to leave me forever
made life heaven, my eyes then sparkled
my heart cried still tears didn’t roll
blood came from eyes, wounded is my soul
I know he will never come my ways
Still I’m eager to meet him and pray
We can walk again hands in hands
On the beach alone we duo lay
True, something lay in me, its grief
Still I feel a flow in my deep breathes
I can’t erase his memories from my mind
They appear fragrant and fresh as breeze
b'fully separation is portrayed...n the pain caused by it.. soul of the poem is the hope still alive playing somewhere in the heart..very lively.. 10++
Love it. The poem seems to have come directly from the heart. I could feel the emotion, your grief, your despair and also the hope in the sweetness offered by memories. Sweet, tender and somewhat touching. Overall, a wonderful poem on love and seperation.
He will return, if you can write like this. He may even be a Poet, as you are destined to be +10 Kind Regards Philip
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/5/2024 7:19:23 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Wonderful and encouraging. Keep writing!