sim sharma

Came Closer To Leave Forever

he came close to me to leave me forever

made life heaven, my eyes then sparkled

my heart cried still tears didn’t roll

blood came from eyes, wounded is my soul

I know he will never come my ways

Still I’m eager to meet him and pray

We can walk again hands in hands

On the beach alone we duo lay

True, something lay in me, its grief

Still I feel a flow in my deep breathes

I can’t erase his memories from my mind

They appear fragrant and fresh as breeze

Poem Submitted: Friday, October 30, 2009

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  • Rex Mathew Mathew (11/1/2009 6:59:00 AM)

    Love it. The poem seems to have come directly from the heart. I could feel the emotion, your grief, your despair and also the hope in the sweetness offered by memories. Sweet, tender and somewhat touching. Overall, a wonderful poem on love and seperation.

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  • Rajaram RamachandranRajaram Ramachandran (10/31/2009 7:33:00 AM)

    The love game well composed as a poem.

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  • Rajaram RamachandranRajaram Ramachandran (10/31/2009 7:33:00 AM)

    The love game well composed as a poem.

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  • Philip Winchester (10/31/2009 4:17:00 AM)

    He will return, if you can write like this.
    He may even be a Poet, as you are destined to be +10
    Kind Regards
    Philip

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  • Indira Babbellapati (10/31/2009 3:15:00 AM)

    keep expressing urself, young lady!

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  • Shelly Shelly (10/31/2009 2:54:00 AM)

    b'fully separation is portrayed...n the pain caused by it..
    soul of the poem is the hope still alive playing somewhere in the heart..very lively..
    10++

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  • Ahmad ShiddiqiAhmad Shiddiqi (10/30/2009 9:04:00 PM)

    Wonderful and encouraging. Keep writing!

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