sim sharma

A Girl's Life

a girl's life.....
before birth, , ,
mumma will you accept me, as nobody want me to live
ma will you fight for me, will you make me live
ma i wan to see the beautiful world, will you allow me to do so
plz dont kill me ma, i m your shadow, , ,

after her birth, , dad will you accept me, ,
will you love me as you love your son
will you care 4 me, as mum care for me
will you let me live, as you wan my brother,

when she grow up(to her love) , ,
will you love me, as i love u
will you care for me as i care for u
will you trust me as i trust u
will u really marry me, as i wana marry u..

when she get married to sum1 whom she dnt even know
r u happy with me, as i am
will u love me as i started loving u,
will you care me as i care u lott
will you accept me as ur love, as i accepted you

after giving birth to a child, , ,
my son, do u love me as i love u lot, ,
your my life, , m i your life?
my world rounds around u, , , do you care a bit for me,
will you make me meet your frndz as i introduce you with me frndz,

but answer remain same, a girl always sacrifice, , , ,
a girl always love, her father brother bf husband son, ,
but in return she always gets a question mark?
will they accept her, , ,

Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 8, 2009

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  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (10/29/2017 9:00:00 PM)

    A nice poetic imagination, sim. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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  • Shelly Shelly (11/10/2009 11:17:00 PM)

    my world rounds around u, , , do you care a bit for me,
    will you make me meet your frndz as i introduce you with me frndz,

    the poem reminds me of all ladies around me...how they believe still their expectations can't be fulfilled..
    a tremendous effort to strengthen the voice of a lady to all the men important in her life around her..
    10++ nice work

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  • Rakesh Bedi (11/8/2009 11:59:00 PM)

    i think it to be an over projection of a side of a woman...we cant, at present, confine a woman in these self-created boundaries of ones mind. She has takes an unexplored flight on her own and it seems that she is enjoying it with full sensitivity n sensibly, too...

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  • The Jesus Of Suburbia Is A LieThe Jesus Of Suburbia Is A Lie (11/8/2009 12:08:00 PM)

    Outstanding poem....!
    I'm speechless after this bitter truth so well furnished in this poems...gr8 work....

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