Wednesday, May 7, 2014

I Will Put The World To Sleep Tonight Comments

Rating: 3.5

I will put the world to sleep for you tonight!

I will close the infinite covers of my books, of my files, of all the lost notebooks on my desk
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Anna Garland 27 May 2014

What a powerful image and language! I do think the poem would be better if it were a little shorter. And for some reason I do not like the spirit that keeps coming up...but maybe that is personal. Beautiful ending.

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Chuy Amante 07 May 2014

Wow! That really carried me right along! I love the feel of it all! After darkness comes and we're all blind, can the morning Sun return, if you don't mind?

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