Saturday, July 18, 2009

I Wish... Comments

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I wish …….the sun is blue
the skies are pink
the grass are purple
the trees are red
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Gita Pusparini
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Sarwar Chowdhury 20 July 2009

Nicely pened all about wishes.......10+

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Gita Pusparini 20 July 2009

Thank you friends for reading my poem, and for your comments......thank you Ted, Thank you Vikram

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Ted M 19 July 2009

Wishes and dreams are the start. To succeed everyone needs wishes and dreams. We need a vision, and then we can go about achieving them. Nice write.

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We all wish, dont we, but all wishes are not granted, good write

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Gita Pusparini

Gita Pusparini

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