valeria gomez

Rookie (el cenizo, tx / laredo, tx)

I Wish - Poem by valeria gomez

i used to cut through the rain
to release all my pain
it's really sad
i miss the life i had
once with my family
we lived so happily
i miss those days
that's what everyone says
i wish i could have my old life back
cuase now happiness i lack
but wishes don't come true
so now i'm left with nothing to do.

Comments about I Wish by valeria gomez

  • (4/13/2012 9:31:00 AM)

    who taught you to write? ! cause i need to talk to them and tell them that they did a hell of a good lob in teaching you! ! ! ! i cant wait to read all your poems! i like your new one, Him. (Report) Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (7/20/2011 11:14:00 PM)

    Through your impressive and well penned you clearly show your great poetic talent! This is a thought provoking piece that enhances a true poet's soul! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your imaginative works! If time permits, please read and enjoy my poems titled: A MISSING ANGEL and AN ANGEL AND A VIOLIN, hoping you enjoy them! Thanks and God Bless You for always! Romeo from New York City! ... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 20, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 21, 2011

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