Iam Loving You, Poem by Abdul Karim

Iam Loving You,



Iam loving you,
Iam loving you,
It's a fact not denied,
Every breathe is a blessed calling,
Understand that concept,
Hold on that love that is Higher than ever,
Forever we are all together.

Wednesday, January 28, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: iam
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 06 February 2009

Again, this is the same formula for success. Repetition at the beginning. A good construction. The last line is weaker but still, OK. GW62

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