Allison Unknown

Ice Blue Eyes

Your eyes
So sweet
And sincere
They change
From ice to blue
How I love those eyes
Can we switch
When your angry
They are pure ice
From what I fear
You have this color too much
Are you ever happy
All those pictures
Of you and I
You have those same eyes
They are never blue
Unless Im their
With you too
We both have blue eyes
Yours are prettier
Than mine
How we stare at each other
Hours and hours
Pass by
When I say its getting late
You stand up and blink
Your eyes
Turn back to ice
We walk to the door
By each other
Not saying a word
I open the door
You go outside
And turn around
To say goodbye
Your eyes
Are so cold
I get goosebumps
On my arms
I want them blue
Before you go
So I lean in
And give you a kiss
You blink one last time
Your eyes
Are warm blue
I get a smile
On my face
And so do you
Knowing what I was trying to do
We say goodbye
Then you leave
For I shut the door
And say
A little prayer
For you to be safe
Keep my blue eyed angel
Safe to play
With me once more
For day after day
I lay down
And fall asleep
Dreaming of those
Ice blue eyes

Poem Submitted: Monday, October 12, 2009
Poem Edited: Thursday, June 30, 2011

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Comments about Ice Blue Eyes by Allison Unknown

  • Trenton Watson (10/13/2009 4:29:00 PM)

    This just what i needed: D

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  • Raymond Rivera (10/12/2009 11:56:00 PM)

    Wow, it is amazing how eyes can say so many things, it is also amazing how you can put it into words...

    Good write Allison.

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  • Justin Unanue (10/12/2009 10:51:00 PM)

    Simple, heartfelt, with a nice rhythm, scheme, and rhyming pattern.

    Everything a poem should be. And I felt personally attached to it with my blue eyes. Still something I could not place nor name was missing.
    9/10

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  • Austin fryer (10/12/2009 10:40:00 PM)

    It's Intresting, Allison. It's nice to read one's besides my own writing, Expecialy from dark to something witch seems to be the complete opposite.

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