Ideal Woman Poem by Zueshan Ali

Ideal Woman

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You look for your ideal woman
In the girth of her coloured
Hips and her curves
That meander
Down
Like an
Hour glass
When you should
Be looking at the way she
Doesn't let your gaze define her.

Sunday, December 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,women,women empowerment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 11 December 2017

A very powerful expression through a short poem.. liked simile.. hour glass... Thanks for sharing

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Chinedu Dike 10 December 2017

A well crafted piece of art depicting the essence of an ideal woman. Brilliant display of poetic skills in nicely encapsulated poem written with conviction. Thanks for sharing Zueshan.

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Zueshan Ali 11 December 2017

Thank you so much. Really appreciate the feedback.

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 December 2017

When you should Be looking at the way she Doesn't let your gaze define her. love, infatuation, attraction of the sexes...... presented very well dear poetess or poet?

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Zueshan Ali 11 December 2017

Thank you so much for the feedback. I am a poetess.

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