Identity Crisis - Draw Your Line! Poem by Jacson Gelato

Identity Crisis - Draw Your Line!

Rating: 5.0


I hate to be called a hedgehog
or a rat or a snake;
I am not identified by the life
I have within me;
the past generations
have named me by my origin,
so they call a rat a rat
and a hedgehog a hedgehog.

But what should I call a man
who can think, who can reason
yet write unworthy lines
and speak of hatred, criticism
besides dictatorial orders?

I am not a lamp in which one can
add a little fuel and extend its glow;
I am just a mind pleasant to the core
and to the principles of life
is my veneration and dedication.

I would not look at the stars
and call them flowers;
I would not look at the ocean
and call it the river;
I would not even like to look at others
and call them good or bad.

I would accept that what is wrong
has to be rectified;
yet a species is known by its identity
and what it can yield.
What is your identity?
Is it not by what you must speak and write
or is it not by the class of gentleness
you must exhibit and uphold?

Identity Crisis - Draw Your Line!
Friday, April 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: character
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Saying Doctor or Manager or Engineer, etc. does not abbreviate man's character. Qualifications only qualify the nature of work a man does and it is a personal improvement that man gains by qualifying himself. It is more important for man to be gentle, understanding and respectful to others. There is no reference made to any of the scientists or inventors as doctors or as engineers but they are rather known by the strength of their discoveries and inventors.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 03 April 2020

One is vividly known by his clear identity........10++++

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