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Idiot Spring

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daffodils tinged brown arched over
hunch backed broken

everything
is so ahead of itself

sparrows freeze
as they shatter through
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Lori Boulard 24 July 2006
Damn, I really admire people who capture such complete thoughts in so few words. 'Everything so ahead of itself' is pure heaven. Excellent.
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Raynette Eitel 21 June 2005
This poem really captures what I felt about spring in the Rockies...living in Colorado. I like the title...and the images...and bringing a 'tinged brown' marriage into it makes it ubiquitous. Good job. Raynette
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