Cosmic Dreamer

Rookie - 24 Points (12/04/1966 / The Cosmos...)

If... - Poem by Cosmic Dreamer

If I could journey back through time,
Would my life be different?
If I had listened to my innermost voice,
Would I have fallen at life's hurdles?
If I had not been so stubborn,
Would my dreams have become reality?
If I'd not lost touch with those once dear,
Would my heart shine with a brighter love?
If I had nurtured the hearts I once knew,
Could my life have been so much more?
If I continue to ask these questions,
Shall I ever become all that I can be? ...

Spread the love... The peace will follow...


Comments about If... by Cosmic Dreamer

  • (12/7/2011 4:22:00 AM)


    Love the axis of our life and what you preach of love peace will return...I agree 100%
    The If is with us all the question is we have used the if by being where we are now, thanks and regards
    (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (12/2/2011 4:56:00 PM)


    Thought provoking write... its easy for the mind to wonder about '..if..' - I really liked the last question - basically where is it going to get you...- great thoughts - wonderful poem! (Report) Reply

Read all 2 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 1, 2011



[Report Error]