Thursday, May 3, 2007

If As Comments

Rating: 5.0

As if I didn’t already know
As if I didn’t feel the blow
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David Taylor
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David Harris 14 May 2007

David, I agree with the others about it being beautiful and heartfelt. I love the way you used coupletes in this piece. Top Marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Marci Made 03 May 2007

Beautiful and heartfelt. I think that if we didn't love someone we wouldn't bother arguing with them for they wouldn't matter to us. What was that old song 'You Always Hurt The One You Love.' Sending hugs your way.~~~~~~~marci.xo

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