If I Could Spill My Secrets Comments

This is a very focused poem that doesn't stray from itself. It doesn't divide into something else. It stays true to itself, though the title suggests multiple secrets about multiple things. Wonderful focus.Well done writer. GW62

I think this is an awesome poem about more than the outer appearance, I think Raven doesn't want this guy to change not because of how he looks but how he acts and he is perfect with the qualities every girl, I would imagine, would want in their partners.

Personally I've never got how someone could fall in love based solely on another persons appearence, but you conveyed your thought in a deep and creative way so it was a good poem anyway.