If I Love You Better Poem by Irvan Hermawan Saichu

If I Love You Better

Rating: 3.0


Where an area that could be dug so deep
I'll keep digging and digging
When the depth could not be determined
It does not mean I quit without doing anything
When I broke my hoe to use hands to continue excavation
I should be proud there is no area of ​ ​ this good
I should be glad there is no area of this beautiful
But can I make the deepest hole?
Because I was just a digger
Yes, exactly........
The hole digger

March 7,1999

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 21 July 2011

There are 3 things that make a man successful: 10 DESIRE,2) DETERMINATION and 3) PERSUASION and I find all this qualities in this well penned, poignant and though provoking. Definitely a 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented works! Poetry runs in your blood! Love and Peace for always! If time permits, please my new posted poem titled: I LEARNED THROUGH YOU, and I hope you enjoy it! RDV from NYC...

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