I would paint your portrait a thousand times,
Yet never capturing your true beauty
But never giving up
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This is a really nice poem Tim that is filled with beauty. You can really go and compute with it, I know that I know exactly what you would have been. Just a side comment... Are you saying your not a poet? Because that poem wasn't 1000 words let alone lines.
I'm not a particular fan of love poems, but this is very good Tim. 10+