Tuesday, May 3, 2011

If Not For You Comments

Rating: 5.0

If not for you we would not have been
You lovingly deemed we should exist
You sent Jesus, your Son, to heal us of sin
For our souls He did and still does persist
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Carmela Patterson
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 May 2011

Great poem with a lot of wisdom. Wonderfully written. Great imagery. Fine poetics. A big...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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Romeo Della Valle 03 May 2011

A very spiritually moving write! A well penned and poignant write! 10+++ God Bless you for always! Love and Peace...

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Carmela Patterson

Carmela Patterson

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