Tuesday, January 13, 2015
If One Day Comments
Rating: ★5.0
if one day you feel like crying...call me
I don't promise you that
I will make you laugh
but I can cry with you
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2/17/2026 3:00:29 PM # 1.0.0
Very nice, but as a former English teacher, let me offer some advice to make it better. Runaway is a real word, but only as a noun. Here you should use RUN AWAY (two words) . [In the first and last lines of verse two] Verse three, last line, you meant QUIET, not QUITE. In the last line, please capitalize God. It's a lovely poem. I have voted it a ten.