Wednesday, July 2, 2014

If There Were Only A Poem Comments

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IF THERE WERE ONLY A POEM

If there were only a poem
That could redeem me
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Shalom Freedman
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Kevin Patrick 19 October 2014

But poems do not solve life problems Especially not for those Who escape those problems Instead of courageously facing them This does feel like a kick in the face when I read it, because writing comes as means of therapeutic release of anxiety and frustration. They might not solve life's problems but they can be a nice medicinal supplement when not feeling well. I Face my problems only by trying to do what is right and good. A good work, even if I disagree slightly on your message

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Brian Johnston 02 July 2014

Well what if rescue were the wrong word? And what if the gift this poem brings instead is a new friend? How would them apples grab you? What if the right company could just make all those problems go away! : -) Really, it could happen!

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