If Us Is A Blues.. (Free{dom} Versus..) Poem by Jamillah Joseph

If Us Is A Blues.. (Free{dom} Versus..)

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Some say..

us is a blues..
the down side to upbeats..

signature sounds of sadness..

the discarded parts of God's creation..
souls cast down and away..

They say..

us is a sorrow-filled, pitiful spiritual..
with no (real) savior to sing of..

a hoarsely sung, worn out work song..
lodged in a closed throat..

us is an unresolved note
{..so they say..}
..deserted in atmospheres.

Liner notes to melancholy litanies

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but I say..
to win, us is all we'll ever need to be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 January 2009

Its like the song of sorrow, blues only in the soul....and the rhythm is still play catching up.Beautiful poem Jamilla.

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Jamillah Joseph

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