(*)if You're Not On Board (Villanelle) Poem by Sailing to windward

(*)if You're Not On Board (Villanelle)



If you're not on board when my ferry sails,
and the spiteful wind's moaning its tirade,
I'll wait by the gate till your bright light hails.

Picture me swimming, with dolphin and whales
and cry only joy at marks that we laid,
If you're not on board when my ferry sails.

Take heart, be strong, at the drive of those nails.
In good time they'll rust - so don't be afraid
I'll wait by the gate till your bright light hails.

Look to our children; put away dark veils.
They'll step that small coin so your ticket's paid,
If you're not on board when my ferry sails.

Laughter's in the offing, sheet in your sails.
While stars warm your hand and waves serenade,
I'll wait by the gate till your bright light hails.

Don't turn your back to a new dawn or blade;
I've kept our ship's log and that'll not fade.
If you're not on board when my ferry sails,
I'll wait by the gate till your bright light hails.

Thursday, August 18, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes:
The poem was written shortly after a good friend and shipmate died at sea in 2009 at the hands of pirates. I've included a few notes for readers who may not be nautically minded.

1.The small coin refers to the ancient practice of shipbuilders putting a silver coin under the main mast to pay the mythical ferry man to ferry the souls of dead sailors to the after life

2. 'The offing' refers to somewhere between where you are and the horizon.

3. 'A new blade' is short for a rudder blade and is a metaphor for a new helmsman ie mate.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 26 January 2014

Ah, as you said, you are a seasoned seafarer as well as a poet. Wonder what you would think about - The Captain's Secret - Adeline

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Patti Masterman 22 September 2011

What a well-wrought and intriguing piece. I love the bit of explanation also. I need to learn to do that (should I ever turn out such an exemplary piece myself) . Great work all around. (Guess I am slightly in love with nautical terms and stuff like that) .

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Sailing to windward

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