Wednesday, December 30, 2015

Ignored Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

You waved me on the middle of-
Ocean with my love.
I'm alone there,
Don't know what to do my self?
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Roseann Shawiak 10 January 2016

Very intense feelings of love, poignant description of an unconditional love and it's inherent loss, that profoundly touches the heart and soul. Feel the love drowning beneath the poem - brings feelings of sadness yet wonder at what was had before. Great Poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Chinedu Dike 09 January 2016

An insightful depiction of the mighty feeling of love - a spiritual experience and a voyage of pure bliss that affects one profoundly, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction from inner recesses of the heart. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Akky. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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