Illusion Poem by blackstars :)

Illusion

Rating: 3.7


I came without anything,
I will leave with nothing.

Whatever we see is generally an illusion,
Life is a dream, nothing is proven.

The bird you just saw, the materialistic things you posses, the achievements you are proud of,
But living your best in this illusion is also important all of the above.

Everything may be an illusion, this world, cosmos and heaven.
But performing our karmas in this world is our duty that should not lessen.
But don't take life too heavily, enjoy it and do not question.

Everything isn't true,
But live magnificently, as
You only live once.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
genre- haibun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bipin Churchung Rabha 28 April 2024

Absolutely. It's a philosophical one.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 April 2024

My note here is, after the prose follows the haiku, but that I cannot see here. My conclusion is that this poem is not a haibun. Thank you for your attention.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 April 2024

CONGRATULATIONS being chosen by PoemHunter and Team as The Member Poem Of The Day! 5 Stars full. I have enjoyed this fascinating poem TFS

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