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Tuesday, June 14, 2005

Illusions Of The Mind Comments

Rating: ★4.3

Consider:
your body
And my body
As one.
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David Zvekic 14 June 2005

I like this poem The conclusion would have a different feel if the line where it says 'The truth: I hurt' said 'The truth: hurts'. Just an observation. this would IMHO make the conclusion more emphatic.

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Raynette Eitel 14 June 2005

This is nice. Raynette

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