Frederick Kesner

Bronze Star - 2,048 Points (28 August / St. Thomas University Hospital)

Illusory - Poem by Frederick Kesner

each morning
his waking shakes him
from fitful sleep

he reaches out
across the bed
the morning light

b l i n d i n g

his illusion vaporises
the space beside him

the wind washes away
the ghost of his
i n f a t u a t i o n

and the scent of her skin
faint and fleeting
f a d i n g

the sun bleaches her face
etched during the night
on the bed clothes...


Topic(s) of this poem: life, realisation

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Illusory by Frederick Kesner

  • (3/22/2009 8:02:00 PM)

    Very cohesive in its delivery. A subconscious brought to life. Like it! (Report) Reply

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  • (3/1/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    Wow. This one is amazing. You capture a moment in time brilliantly. (Report) Reply

  • Joe Breunig (5/26/2006 11:34:00 AM)

    An enjoyable piece; nice write! (Report) Reply

  • (5/18/2006 1:24:00 PM)

    The hauntingly beautiful 'I llusory'what a fine way with words here,10 from me
    Just Brilliant
    Love Duncan
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  • (11/27/2004 5:16:00 PM)

    And his woman of his dreams lays by his side no more.

    I dream them next to me at times too. Good one.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 25, 2004

Poem Edited: Monday, March 12, 2018

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