Immortal Love Poem by Dave Tanwar

Immortal Love

Rating: 5.0


When thy passes by
No more they breathe high
Some eyes still catch you neigh
But, a pity, some gray old guys

When you smile some low
Once people were used to bow
Boys standing out your house in row
Just to see thy’s face glow

No more your hands beautiful, just skin
You no more remember days we spent on inn
We together looking over the hill
Try to live again all those years, like fish without fin

Those nearby, now too far, to say hi!
Your eyes to wrinkled to possibly shy
Tears are dry; hence no need to cry
An old friend comes and says Goodbye

No more whistling when you walk
No more flirting when you talk
No more Awes when you in shock
No more kissing behind the rock

Still together with you I chatter
Love you enough to make you flatter
Holding you hands; nothing to matter
I say to you “from you nothing was even close to better”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joelstine Gonzaga 19 July 2009

oh hello dear friend. I do indeed love it... so unique..please do look at my selection of poems and please do comment. Thank you :)

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Emma Adamyan 18 July 2009

very beautiful and deep poem, 'Dave'

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Dave Tanwar

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Jodhpur, India
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