A Day With Mother Poem by Dave Tanwar

A Day With Mother

Rating: 5.0


Yesterday morning, when I was sitting on the couch
Eating chocolates and throwing away the pouch
I suddenly heard someone shouting
Oh My God! ! That is my mom flouting
Dave, stop being a Rave! !
Get up, and get some shave.
But Mom, now even it is sun that is not awake
I will do it, not now, but bit some late.
If you want Breakfast, Lunch and dinner to survive
Better getup and be ready and dare if you think to give me bribe
I then brush my teeth and razor my cheek
Wear my tie, put on my pants and now I breathe

She enters my room
In her hand she holds a broom
Clean it before I count five
Or be ready, as I know how to make you drive
I clean my bed, tuck my pant and hang the shirt
Look around with the eagle’s eye, if there is any dirt
With your mom you can’t even flirt
She knows your every vein since your birth
Now it is the time to learn for all this what you have earned
Bar of Kit-Kat and a pat on your back, but was that all for I yearned?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 17 July 2009

A good poem on mother.....10+++

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Ency Bearis 19 July 2009

a good poem...mother knows everything and can smell your secret...unique write..

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Ken E Hall 19 July 2009

A good tongue in cheek with mum poem left me tickled well done........regards

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Lynn Glover 18 July 2009

Dave: A good write about mother. Remember mother knows best. She very cleverly straightened you out that morning as mine has done to me in the past. Just keep on loving her. Good poem good rythem Lynn

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Kristina B; Williams 18 July 2009

gave you n a day with mother a 10+++

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Kristina B; Williams 18 July 2009

this is original in origin, had me smiling....good 1 on mother

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Dave Tanwar

Dave Tanwar

Jodhpur, India
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