Monday, January 23, 2017

Improbabilis Comments

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Forever the rituals
of hate and love continue.
The sun survives the feet.
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Satish Verma
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Lantz Pierre 17 February 2017

No need for more. No more. A motorcycle defines a binary system. With a simple twist of the wrist more power is applied. The roar of the motor. Fuel consumed. Fuel firing the piston, driving the rod. A matter of balance. A matter of masculinity. A mote for error.

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Paul Brookes 24 January 2017

To believe in a utopia in a dystopian age is hard. Give love to your enemy or a hand yo your oppressor. Peot see with penetrative glance and you see more sometomes than most a vivid poem enjoyed thanks

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