Tuesday, February 1, 2005

Impudence Comments

Rating: 5.0

And God so loved his only son
that, as the minister was saying,
a young lad stood up, unafraid
and shouted, 'if God had really, truly loved
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Michael Shepherd 02 February 2005

You're on a roll, Herbert! To adapt your own title - GOD said: 'Why oh why does the Church put people off me? Is it for this that I created freewill, for God's sake? '

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Sandra Osborne 02 February 2005

Thats different Herbert. Good to see more experimenting, you always have such great endings too.

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Rich Hanson 01 February 2005

Loved it... so....British. You couldn't have set the poem in an American church service and been convincing.

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