And God so loved his only son
that, as the minister was saying,
a young lad stood up, unafraid
and shouted, 'if God had really, truly loved
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Thats different Herbert. Good to see more experimenting, you always have such great endings too.
Loved it... so....British. You couldn't have set the poem in an American church service and been convincing.
You're on a roll, Herbert! To adapt your own title - GOD said: 'Why oh why does the Church put people off me? Is it for this that I created freewill, for God's sake? '