Saturday, April 16, 2005

In 4/4 Time Comments

Rating: 4.1

look:
those strangers, those lovers, they met without a past.
they're making a story.
they're writing for the dreamers,
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Travis Bowden
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Michael Shepherd 17 April 2005

A brilliant condensation. I'm so envious that I keep trying to rewrite the last line - but I can't!

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 16 April 2005

Short, sweet and meaningful.Well written.Thank you.

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Matthew C. Mueller 16 April 2005

Its short but beautifully written, flows

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