Saturday, May 9, 2009

In A Night Comments

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Yesterday...
before sunset
The people...
Their homes..
...
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Afzal Shauq
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Tanvi Damle 20 January 2010

itz short but conveys the message beautifully...wow...srsly nice

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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 June 2009

'Last night... lines were drawn things changed what was... is no more.' Yes, you have nicely concluded your idea with the last stanza. Beautiful short poem,10+++

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