in a sudden everything disappears
and everythung in its real way appears
the life pressure starts to increase
and you can hear your heart beats
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Well, sometimes one discovers unpleasant things so suddenly and it feels exactly the way you've described it - excellent metaphor!
Beautiful write... you hold a pen made of real emotions - that's the best poetic tool you could ever ask for :)
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Well, sometimes one discovers unpleasant things so suddenly and it feels exactly the way you've described it - excellent metaphor! Beautiful write... you hold a pen made of real emotions - that's the best poetic tool you could ever ask for :)