In Conversation With God... Poem by shweta advani

In Conversation With God...



I was just
In conversation with God
Discussing how to solve tough problems
N tackle with odds
God looked at me with a smile
n said my child
Firstly please don't weep
n listen to my voice in ur heart very deep

I know u r tired n want some rest
but u r a soldier
n every moment u have to face a test..

So get up n put a fight
N u will notice that in the end
you would have won
Coz I m cheering n watching u play
In the Game Of Life....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashaant Sagar 23 March 2010

A very good poem. Short but to the point.It surely shows the simplicity of your mind.Keep up the good work

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Andrea Ugona 17 May 2009

Love it and thanks for commenting on my poem - 10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 09 May 2009

And after all what is the God? .....The eternal child playing the eternal game in the eternal garden....Sri Aurobinbdo.......And we are his play mates............He is the God and all souls are his gopis........and that Raslila continues for eternity and no one is tired neither him nor the souls and all yearns for more and more pleasure..................... Verily he is bliss........A Good Write...........

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Hannah Benson 03 May 2009

i like it i even like the spelling errors they add personality to the poem i like your poems i hope you get them published one day

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