In God's Volume Of Poetry Comments

this simple poem conjures images of sunlight and sadness. well done, my friend! Jake

Nice work, buddy. And I agree with Sherrie; dont compare yourself with other poets. Everyone has different styles for whatever reasons. Actually that'd be a good topic to investigate...why poets choose certain styles to write in as opposed to other styles or forms. Wait, did I say I agree with Sherrie? Uh oh..you better stay indoors for a few days, Uriah. Theres obviously a freak hailstorm coming your way. :) Keep up the good work, my friend.

This is beautiful. I really like 'moonlight words.' This little gem is surely one of your best and touched my heart. Raynette