In Love Poem by Baily Lancaster

In Love



my heart is weak,
my luv is lost,
my head is so confused,

i cant sleep,
i cant drink,
with the thought of losin' you,

but life goes on,
well i cant tell,
since you put me under a spell,

six months have passed,
how long will my love for you last,

but skys get bluer,
and grass gets greener,
birds fly higher and higher,

but my love for you will last forever,
because the more i think about it,

when i try to forget everything you put me throught,
thats when i found out,

that i was truly and deeply,
in love with you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

this is a lovely, cute and innocent love poem.... are you really 9 yrs old and have written a broken heart love poem?

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Alanah Flad 19 July 2009

that was a wonderful poem! i have felt the same as you and im sorry

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