In Love Poem by Rachel Butler

In Love



(Dedicated to the unknown gardener)


One moment
Jubilant!
the next
Sorrowful!
Capricious is my condition,
Predetermined.

Sparrow

Monday, October 24, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 20 February 2018

Love swings like a pendulum between jubilation and sorrow, as your glittering lyric hints at.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 September 2015

Predetermined? ? ? Do you believe in Predetermination. we can make and design our lives by working hard. life is short. make the best out of it. like your short verses containing great meaning. thank you

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Rachel Butler 28 September 2015

The condition of being in love is the 'condition' that in it's self is predetremined.

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Hazel Durham 18 August 2015

Wonderful write Rachel and so true love is such an extreme emotion our moods swings to high and low!

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Ken E Hall 23 December 2011

Fate the tracks we are bound to follow mirrored in your poem, truthful...regards

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