Thursday, May 5, 2011

In Memory Of... Comments

Rating: 5.0

The love was pointless. I thought it would last.
She betrayed me and broke my heart.
I loved her.
She betrayed me.
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cailah marie
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 May 2011

I liked the poem. Wonderfully written. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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