Eden Panotes Orbista

Rookie - 329 Points (April 21,1956 / Daet, Camarines Norte)

In My Dreams - Poem by Eden Panotes Orbista

I want a simple life with you
And i won't ask for anything more
You're all i need and a life ahead with you
To love you, to cherish you and to care for you!

Always remember that i love you
And that's a promise forever
I'll sleep with you..........in my thoughts
Tonight, ....because, there's only you.

Random thoughts ran in my head
After a long and difficult day
But believe me, there never has been a moment
That you are out of my mind!

Our life ahead will be pink and fruitful
We will always be young and in bloom
I love to envision us in a tight embrace
When the final moment comes.......how lovely that would be!


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Thinking of you.

Comments about In My Dreams by Eden Panotes Orbista

  • Eden Panotes Orbista (3/12/2017 12:15:00 PM)


    Thank you sooo much my dear colleague, my dear Poets for voting for my poem to be the poem of the day! Richard Wlodarski, Siddartha Montik, Kevin Patrick, Christina Simmons, Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black, Gladys Brown Prince, Unnikrishnan E S, Jayatissa K. Liyanage, Edward Kofi Louis, Indira Renganathan, Clarence Prince, Anil Kumar Panda, Tom Allport, Lucas Cousin Tuka, Linet Sabastian, Col Muhamad Khalid Khan, thank you sooooo much (Report) Reply

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  • Eden Panotes Orbista (3/3/2017 2:48:00 PM)


    Thank you sooo much my dear colleague, my dear Poets for voting for my poem to be the poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • (2/9/2017 10:51:00 PM)


    We will always be young and in bloom. Love that line. The simplicity of the poem makes it sound like young love. However, there is a lot more to it than meets the eye. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day! (Report) Reply

    Eden Panotes Orbista Eden Panotes Orbista (3/3/2017 2:19:00 PM)

    Oh Thanks somuch Richard Wlodarski.

  • Siddartha Montik (2/9/2017 10:38:00 PM)

    True love! !
    So Simply. expressed TRUE love...in perfect and delicate words! ! ! thanks for this piece poet! ! (Report) Reply

  • (2/9/2017 9:50:00 PM)


    Sweetly delectable ode to the one that fills your heart with love. Its wonderful to have someone fill your dreams with hope and delight. Congratulations for poem of the day, perfect for Valentines month! (Report) Reply

  • Christina Simmons (2/9/2017 8:09:00 PM)

    In My Dreams:
    I'm afraid I don't like this poem: I'm aware it's a dreamer's dream but it kept bringing up codependency. Perhaps we all suffer from the bug? ? ? Congrat being aired for the day! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (2/9/2017 5:59:00 PM)

    In My Dreams
    Lovely poem about the simple life but the most important factor is still love and devotion.. a ten.. (Report) Reply

  • Gladys Brown Prince (2/9/2017 2:57:00 PM)


    A simple loving life is great a life. (Report) Reply

  • (2/9/2017 11:15:00 AM)

    A Lovely poem on the pleasure of dedication
    Hi Eden,

    Congrats for Poet of the Day.
    Lovely poem, on the pleasure of dedicating one's life entire for the happiness of others.
    (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (2/9/2017 10:39:00 AM)

    My Dreams
    To dedicate oneself to the other, an essence in love. Well expressed hearty thoughts wonderfully penned. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/9/2017 9:36:00 AM)

    Difficult day
    Race, embrace! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan (2/9/2017 8:19:00 AM)


    That is the nature of love to submit oneself to the other...good poem indeed- 10 (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince (2/9/2017 7:59:00 AM)


    How nice? To be ever mindful of one we love!
    Thanks for sharing!
    (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (2/9/2017 6:28:00 AM)


    Deeply emotional love is flowing freely in lines.
    Our life ahead will be pink and fruitful
    We will always be young and in bloom..
    is very nice
    Congrats.
    (Report) Reply

  • Tom Allport (2/9/2017 4:00:00 AM)

    tom allport
    lovely poem of togetherness to the last? (Report) Reply

  • Lucas Cousin Tuka (2/9/2017 2:58:00 AM)

    wonderfull
    Mrs Edeen Panotes, i cherish your write up so much, and i believe God has been the source of your inspiration.I understood something deep concerning love in this poem titled IN MY DREAM, In every genuine love, wherver a lover may be let the name and picture of his or her lover always be in both heart and also reflect in your hearts at all time, Mrs Eden Panotes, i wish you more inspiration to compose more inspired poem, thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Lucas Cousin Tuka (2/9/2017 2:45:00 AM)

    wonderful
    mrs edeen panotes, i cherish your poem so much, God gave you the divine insigth to make it known to every genuine lovers to know their resposibilities to each other...in life a man need to be content with what he has, ....in a truthfull relationship, wherever you are let the name and picture of your love one always be in your heart and also reflect in your mind at all time...mrs Eden i wish you more inspiration in jesus name. (Report) Reply

  • Linet Sabastian (2/9/2017 2:36:00 AM)

    BEAUTIFUL
    Beautiful words used in this poem. Congratulations. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (2/9/2017 1:14:00 AM)


    'You're all i need and a life ahead with you'. The poem is the reflection of the passion and yearning of a lover for the beloved. Sentiments expressed beautifully. Thanks & Congrats, Eden. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (2/9/2017 12:35:00 AM)

    Envision
    Sweet and lovely poem... Reminds me of the song with the same title
    popularized by REO SPEEDWAGON... congrats on being selected for
    the day... I give you a perfect 10.... Nasa Labo, Camarines Norte ako last year. Nakarating
    din ako sa Daet..... What a beautiful province....
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, September 6, 2013


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