Tuesday, March 25, 2014

In The Blazing Heat Of The Bushfire Comments

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See the fire blazing, blinds you, frightening.
Smell the smoky air, makes you cough and panic.
Hear the fall of burning trees, a crack; as loud as lightning.
Taste the dryness of the air.
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Erica Graham
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Erica Graham 25 March 2014

Thank you Lyn Paul! It's encouraging to hear people like my work. Please have a look at my other poems as well.

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Lyn Paul 25 March 2014

Much captured in these few lines. Thank you Erica

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Erica Graham 25 March 2014

Thank you Gajanan Mishra! Your feedback is much appreciated!

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Gajanan Mishra 25 March 2014

blazing fire, good writing, thanks.

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