In The Cold Poem by Valerie Daley

In The Cold

Rating: 5.0


It took time to realize we made the right move
Reality proves the things we take so seriously
Are just a game we'll surely loose
Knowing in time true love conquers all the pain
But in your heart you know it'll never quite be the same
Up and down On and off
Always against the grain
It's always the same.
Never the best we could be
Look to the future, you'll see
Keeping my composure
In the freezing cold
I'm letting go of love
I know I no longer hold

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marilyn Lott 20 November 2008

We have to know when it's time to move on. You said it well. A '10! ' Keep writing and sharing. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Sumita Datta 20 November 2008

well expressed... Valerie

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