Tuesday, November 27, 2012

In The Eyes Of The Beholder (Thought) Comments

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Life is none but a winding road,
Filled with questions and confusion
Keeping to its own little code.
Many are lost at the beginning of there journey,
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Poet of the River
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Kevin Patrick 14 December 2012

I like the message in this, the metaphor for what we all must go through on our path, I once had an idea for something similar but I never really completed it, I think you did a great job thoughtful AND funny (love the closing of the first stanza) A great read

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Poet of the River

Poet of the River

California, but move around a lot.
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