In Their Eyes... Poem by lamis fahal

In Their Eyes...

Rating: 3.5


that is what i read
in closed people eyes
it doesnt make sleep
but only make me dies
'you suddenly intruded
and made our life hell
and we dont like you
and because of you its not well
all we want from you
is to disapper
can you so do
buz you made us dropp many tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaughn Bekker 24 May 2010

nice poem, well done: 0)

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Samantha Willison 27 April 2010

this is a great poem and so true

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Shekhar Joshi 12 March 2010

Nice....but U have a long way to go girl... Gud luck girl.... :)

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