In This Candle Light Poem by harsimran kaur

In This Candle Light

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in this candle light
when i see your face
i feel as
i am looking on a
cold statue
with lots of pain
and patience to adore this pain
the statue; which
confronted every storm every rain
looking at
the calmness in your eyes
and your body filled with grace
i become strong
strong enough to face
the feline world out there
but with a little touch i realise
ask myself
is it really calmness
or the coldness you embraced

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
its for someone really special
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 13 May 2012

A great poem, a good write.

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