In This Candle Light Poem by harsimran kaur

In This Candle Light

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in this candle light
when i see your face
i feel as
i am looking on a
cold statue
with lots of pain
and patience to adore this pain
the statue; which
confronted every storm every rain
looking at
the calmness in your eyes
and your body filled with grace
i become strong
strong enough to face
the feline world out there
but with a little touch i realise
ask myself
is it really calmness
or the coldness you embraced

Sunday, May 13, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: coldness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
its for someone really special
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 13 May 2012

A great poem, a good write.

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